Mistakes !

"Some people think that stars don't exist when its raining, but  they do exist in presence of a glow even it is raining . Mistakes are hidden if you give a light definitely you are going to shine. Accept it, mend it, don't repeat it.... "

Today I  quarreled  
With my soulmate 
Which ended 
At the end of the day
With a golden  word
Sorry! That was my mistake. 

Sometimes I wonder
What are  mistakes? 
Are these some disaster 
That breaks with
A slightest effort 
The thread that is weakest
And has effect 
Till time are hardest. 

Are these mistakes 
Some kind of alien?  
That spreads its 
Weird, solitude 
And unloved nature
That makes people
Alone admist
Of lovely people. 

Are these mistakes 
Some distracting poles? 
That  refuses own 
People's love and support
That attracted them once
Before the poles existed.  

Mistakes are populate
Taken in misunderstandings
Pronounced within fractions 
Giving aches and tensions
a slight line when crossed
A confused state- 
To stand for my respect
Or  get hurt and accept! 

She might think
I'm self obsessed 
And egoistic nevertheless 
All matters is
Whether mistakes decide 
Or you decide
To accept or to regret 
When accused to forget
Their mistakes. 
                         --Sujitha




Comments

  1. Fabulous. I love it......keep going

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  2. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

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  3. Mistake are accepted by people by mistake so mistake is not mistaken until it mistakely mistakeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ nice words no mistake are there in your words

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  4. Nice poem da..πŸ˜πŸ‘...especially Lines of 5 th stanza ..i loved it..πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

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  5. "Whether mistake decide
    Or you decide
    To accept or to regret
    When accused to forget
    Their mistake".......golden linesπŸ‘ŒπŸ”₯

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  6. 😘😍😍😍😍

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  7. Nice dear loved it keep going suji ...😘😘😍

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  8. Comparisons between acceptance and refusal were beautiful.

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