Mistakes !
"Some people think that stars don't exist when its raining, but they do exist in presence of a glow even it is raining . Mistakes are hidden if you give a light definitely you are going to shine. Accept it, mend it, don't repeat it.... "
With my soulmate
Which ended
At the end of the day
With a golden word
Sorry! That was my mistake.
Sometimes I wonder
What are mistakes?
Are these some disaster
That breaks with
A slightest effort
The thread that is weakest
And has effect
Till time are hardest.
Are these mistakes
Some kind of alien?
That spreads its
Weird, solitude
And unloved nature
That makes people
Alone admist
Of lovely people.
Are these mistakes
Some distracting poles?
That refuses own
People's love and support
That attracted them once
Before the poles existed.
Mistakes are populate
Taken in misunderstandings
Pronounced within fractions
Giving aches and tensions
a slight line when crossed
A confused state-
To stand for my respect
Or get hurt and accept!
She might think
I'm self obsessed
And egoistic nevertheless
All matters is
Whether mistakes decide
Or you decide
To accept or to regret
When accused to forget
Their mistakes.
--Sujitha
Fabulous. I love it......keep going
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ReplyDeleteMistake are accepted by people by mistake so mistake is not mistaken until it mistakely mistakeπππππ nice words no mistake are there in your words
ReplyDeleteNice poem da..ππ...especially Lines of 5 th stanza ..i loved it..ππ
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ReplyDelete"Whether mistake decide
ReplyDeleteOr you decide
To accept or to regret
When accused to forget
Their mistake".......golden linesππ₯
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ReplyDeleteMesmerizing π✌️
ReplyDeleteNice dear loved it keep going suji ...πππ
ReplyDeleteComparisons between acceptance and refusal were beautiful.
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