Tolerance in Patience !

Exclusive nature
Exotic and eternal 
Nurtures  mortal  creatures 
A wonder to wonder
Bliss and joyful
Filled with warmth 
Adds a comfort that soothes 
In the blanket of mother Earth.

Humans - a part Eternity 
When differentiated 
 Inquisitive heart
Got a reply patiently- 
The impatient Behavior 
Of such creations  
Always a hurry and burry 
In their pace 
Decision shaking its shape 
End results are all fake. 

Boldness and Strength 
That came hand in hand
Patience approach 
A glance of vision 
Seeking intentions 
Grabing  it on time 
Creates an inspiration 
Thought process 
With the motion that-
All is the matter of
Tolerance in patience 
That Gave them
Their own  broach. 

Contemporary world
Exhausted and numb
Always running 
Rarely  analyzing 
With a  bunch of keys 
To open one lock 
Confused and trembling 
Again the notion  that-
All is the matter of 
Tolerance in patience
That they disobeyed 
In impatiently. 

Not dissing like that
But a point of view 
Being eager is good
But impatience  worst-
 A strong quote to rest my pen 
Joting my experience 
That I went through, 
Opportunities  are continuous 
Time is to prepare 
Time is to experience 
'Cause  all is the matter of patience 
To look, seek and go. 

                                    --Sujitha
 





Comments

  1. UnknownMay 5, 2020 at 5:06 AM

    V good , keep going ur inquisitive nature can be seen through ur words

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  2. UnknownMay 5, 2020 at 5:07 AM

    Marvelous.... Fantastic suji.... 💯I'm speechless 🙊.. keep on dong da😘

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  3. TaniyaMay 5, 2020 at 5:16 AM

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  4. TaniyaMay 5, 2020 at 5:18 AM

    Grt lines🔥🔥

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  5. UnknownMay 5, 2020 at 5:20 AM

    🖤❤❤❤❤

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  6. LakshicaaMay 5, 2020 at 5:37 AM

    Nice 🔥

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  7. LakshaMay 5, 2020 at 5:45 AM

    Amazing piece of work👏👏...keep inking 👍🔥

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  8. Smitha AdithanMay 5, 2020 at 6:17 AM

    Keep up your same calm patience that you have now, one day you'll reach your place. Kudos darling.

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  9. UnknownMay 5, 2020 at 6:30 AM

    Nice

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  10. PinkyMay 5, 2020 at 10:01 AM

    Bunch of keys to open one lock need more patience good lines yar 👏👏 Rock the words with patience

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  11. R KumarMay 5, 2020 at 1:06 PM

    Like stone, tolerating the impacts of hammer and waiting till final hit, for becoming beautiful sculpture.
    Had it been in hurry burry, it would have developed crack.
    If it did not bear the impacts, it would have remained rock, not beautiful sculpture.
    It would have thought about why it was being hit, so it was tolerant and patient.

    So think to wait and bear or wait and bear to think.

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    1. Sujitha _ LakshaMay 6, 2020 at 5:35 AM

      @R Kumar thank u so much for your kind words. Means a lot that your took time to convey your appreciation to my poem. I cherish your words. Keep reading keep supporting. Thanks a lot sir. Hope to fulfill your expectations in future as well. Once again thank you so much

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  12. SHASMITHAMay 5, 2020 at 7:51 PM

    Great poetry

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  13. AsunaMay 6, 2020 at 9:11 AM

    Great work

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  14. RITIKA PARIDAMay 6, 2020 at 11:11 AM

    Your poem are always mind refreshing and wonderful dear...❤️👍

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  15. MokshiMay 6, 2020 at 5:57 PM

    👍👌 very nice yrr

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  16. Sujitha _ LakshaMay 7, 2020 at 7:18 AM

    Thank you so much everyone for taking time and reading out my work.... Everyone's words of encouragement added a new boost to compose more and more works. I am grateful to each one of you. Thank you so much once again. Keep reading keep supporting. Hope to fulfill all tour expectations in future as well. Lots of joy to each one.

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