Tolerance in Patience !
Exclusive nature
Exotic and eternal
Nurtures mortal creatures
A wonder to wonder
Bliss and joyful
Filled with warmth
Adds a comfort that soothes
In the blanket of mother Earth.
Humans - a part Eternity
When differentiated
Inquisitive heart
Got a reply patiently-
The impatient Behavior
Of such creations
Always a hurry and burry
In their pace
Decision shaking its shape
End results are all fake.
Boldness and Strength
That came hand in hand
Patience approach
A glance of vision
Seeking intentions
Grabing it on time
Creates an inspiration
Thought process
With the motion that-
All is the matter of
Tolerance in patience
That Gave them
Their own broach.
Contemporary world
Exhausted and numb
Always running
Rarely analyzing
With a bunch of keys
To open one lock
Confused and trembling
Again the notion that-
All is the matter of
Tolerance in patience
That they disobeyed
In impatiently.
Not dissing like that
But a point of view
Being eager is good
But impatience worst-
A strong quote to rest my pen
Joting my experience
That I went through,
Opportunities are continuous
Time is to prepare
Time is to experience
'Cause all is the matter of patience
To look, seek and go.
--Sujitha
V good , keep going ur inquisitive nature can be seen through ur words
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ReplyDeleteKeep up your same calm patience that you have now, one day you'll reach your place. Kudos darling.
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ReplyDeleteBunch of keys to open one lock need more patience good lines yar 👏👏 Rock the words with patience
ReplyDeleteLike stone, tolerating the impacts of hammer and waiting till final hit, for becoming beautiful sculpture.
ReplyDeleteHad it been in hurry burry, it would have developed crack.
If it did not bear the impacts, it would have remained rock, not beautiful sculpture.
It would have thought about why it was being hit, so it was tolerant and patient.
So think to wait and bear or wait and bear to think.
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