Mortal Mortality !

" Problems will be a big problem till you take them big , nothing is so big than believing in yourself to fight it - 
Change it and see the difference in it "

Mind boggles why -
Why people so restless?
Why life taken worthless?
Is it so unfaithful ?
Is it so difficult to live ?

What if sun stops shining?
What if moon stops glowing?
What if earth stop spinning?
What if life become lifeless ?
Precisely created 
Each has its own charm 
As each is only one 
Nothing is vain.

Life is gifted 
Death is Destined 
Why losing its eternity 
Before the destiny
Hold on ! Take a breath
Difficulties are to test 
To give your best .

One life granted to everyone
Each with problems unique
But why interpreted differently
Chose the way to rest in peace 
When you can tolerate 
And succeed .

Alas ! People hard to bare 
Taking steps rare
Choosing way to death 
Losing their last breath
Positive people's mentality 
Resting in mortal mortality !

                                        --Sujitha

Comments

  1. LakshaJuly 11, 2020 at 11:55 PM

    "One life granted to everyone
    Each with problems unique
    But why interpreted differently"
    These words are very perfect usually Humans take every problems complicated and struggle to face it but he should realize all have problems and capacity within them to face it...Beautiful write!!!!!!!

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    1. MadhuJuly 12, 2020 at 12:23 AM

      It's really a good work suji. I like second stanza

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  2. SHASMITHAJuly 12, 2020 at 12:52 AM

    Really great words Dr which brings positive vibes

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    1. Sujitha _ LakshaJuly 12, 2020 at 1:17 AM

      Positive vibes are in you that you were able to see the positivity. Lots of joy to you . Thank you so much.

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  3. UnknownJuly 12, 2020 at 12:53 AM

    Meaningful lines.
    Ur words as a power to speak to the soul, that says I can't.
    Keep Moving with the word of positivity.

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    1. Sujitha _ LakshaJuly 12, 2020 at 1:16 AM

      Thank you so much for your kind words . Keep reading keep supporting 🤗

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  4. CattyJuly 12, 2020 at 1:06 AM

    "Life is gifted
    Death is Destined
    Why losing its eternity
    Before the destiny "

    Worded so well. .. Life has to be lived not to be ended. .. All the Best for Your Brightful Career😊☮

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    1. Sujitha _ LakshaJuly 12, 2020 at 1:15 AM

      Thank you so much @Catty . I feel fortunate enough that I was able to convey it in a well manner . Thank you for your patience in reading. Lots of joy to you .

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  5. UnknownJuly 12, 2020 at 1:58 AM

    Life is gifted
    Death is Destined
    Why losing its eternity
    Before the destiny
    Hold on ! Take a breath
    Difficulties are to test
    To give your best ... 👌👌👌👌

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  6. Georgette ThomasJuly 12, 2020 at 4:15 AM

    Looove the depths in this! And I do like the darkness of this truth brought to life!! Bravo!!! 🌹🌹❤️❤️

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    1. Sujitha _ LakshaJuly 12, 2020 at 5:40 AM

      Thank you so much Georgette for your kind words .

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  7. Ms. BlueJuly 14, 2020 at 12:02 AM

    "Life is gifted
    Death is Destined
    Why losing its eternity
    Before the destiny
    Hold on ! Take a breath
    Difficulties are to test
    To give your best"
    Perfect and powerful lines 💙✨ admiring the richness of your poetry 😍

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